Thursday, October 8, 2009

o my

I think that the most important question on the peer review would have been the one about the theses. I was struggling a lot on how to write those, because they set up the rest of my paper so I wanted them to be perfect. My peer reviews were not too helpful in anyway so I am having other people look over it, hopefully giving me more feedback to make my paper that much better. I want to do better on this paper than I did on my last, but I feel like this one is a lot more difficult.
On our memoir, it was a story about me and I had all of the details right in my head. There was no context, no book to relate it to, and no research to be done. This one is more of a stretch for me because it takes a lot more preparation in order to perfect it for the grade I want. I devoted multiple hours to write my rough draft, and I feel like I have another good amount of hours still to perfect it.

1 comment:

  1. I also thought the thesis question was the most important and relevant question in regards to getting a good grade on the paper. I was suprised, however, as to how many people in class had a poor thesis or didn't have one at all when we presented them along with our music videos.

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